ami primerno, бликът на шапката е доста нелогичен. от страната на сянката е, няма общо с формата на шапката и вместо да я подчертава, я прави по-неясна. освен това самата шапка се е врязала в черепа на мъжа. и разни други дреболии.
Love it. I looks so good. I just started doing logos for a few people and making mock logos to build my portfolio. Please take a look if you get a chance. I really like this. I'm really new to digital art and still learning. Tips and comments would really help. Hope to hear back. Thanks
Thanks mate! This is only my second logo that i have done with a pen tool and i am pretty happy with it. My tip to you would be: sketch out a simple design or find a reference picture and just work with the pen tool to make the sketch or reference look more good and rough. I did this logo with about 4 reference pictures taking elements from all of them.
Btw. i recommend that you sketch since you are very good at drawring.